参考・英文エッセイサンプル

米国大使館宛エッセイ
「Statement of purpose and What I plan to achieve」

米国ビザ、取得しました。5年間有効です。

米国大使館は、この私の長いエッセイをちゃんと読んでくれたのでしょうか？？

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細かいニュアンスや、シチュエーションに最適な単語などはこれからもっと勉強しないといけないと思います。
でも長い文章だよなぁ。長すぎず短すぎないのがポイントだっていうけど、だって言いたいことがいっぱいあるんだもん。まだ書ききれない（笑）。

書いた日の日付
Consular Section
Embassy of the U.S.A.
1-10-5 Akasaka， minato-ku Tokyo 107-0052

Dear Sirs:

My name is 自分の名前. I am applying for F-1 student visa in order to attend HELP-Program in University of Hawaii at Manoa， which provides intensive English Language course.
And I’d like to participate from 学校開始日 to 学校終了日.

I have been working at 今の会社名(業務内容)，
for more than 10 yeras since I graduated from 大学名 in 卒業年.

I’d like to study marketing and management including international PR .
I believe the best place to study advertising and marketing is in the US， which leads the world’s
economy and trend including Japanese ones.

Since my last TOEIC score is 735 (Test date :テスト日。直近のが望ましい)， I need to study English for a few months　and score up TOEFL ，initially. *The certificate of TOEIC is enclosed.
I also felt strongly the necessity of the English conversation.
I think my studying English is very important to grow myself in the future.

My main objective to study in the US is to be able to secure a good career in Japan.
I am eager to carry out my job with professional competence in Japan. I am most anxious to have
global skills of Advertising and International Marketing management.
Studying abroad at American School will make me take a global view of business in Japan.

Even if I can not find such a kind of job， I can survive in Japan， at worst by depending on my parents who own a house in 場所 and run a domestic company.
It is a maker named 会社名，making and retailing 売っている商品内容.
In the future， I may possibly take over my parents’ company in Japan.
Therefore， after I finish study in the US， I’ll do return to Japan and make the most of my skill.　If you have any questions， please feel free to contact me.

There should not be any financial problem at all. I have sufficient funds to pay all tuition and other expenses.
Please refer to the enclosed financial statement from 銀行名 bank (my account) .

I will return to Japan once for a while everytime after I finish the school term.
Since I purchased 3-month-fixed air ticket， the copy is enclosed.

I would appreciate your granting F-Visa which enables me to study in your country.

Sincerely，　私の直筆サイン